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Thursday, August 29, 2019

A irresistible lunch

Today in reading we read  a book about there lunch and here is mine

1 comment:

  1. Hi rarika,
    I like your drawing about your irresistible lunch. Maybe next time you can make your blurb a bit bigger because it kind of a short blurb. Also next time can you use some punctuation and use adjectives?

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