Hello fellow readers, if you didn't know it's Fathers day this weekend! so you better plan something for you Dad! Now for the past Monday, Wednesday and Friday I have been doing google hangouts for writing and in writing we are doing any type of writing about your Dad, Granddad, Uncle etc because it's very close till Fathers day! I have deiced to do a slide show and make my own drawings to be creative ( I got the drawing idea from Son:D ). Thank you for reading my blurb! head on down to the slide show underneath.
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, September 3, 2021
Thursday, August 5, 2021
Writing Warm Up
Hello fellow bloggers welcome back to my blog where I share all of my learning. Today I am the blogger of the week! We have to blog our warm up slides so today I am! Today's warm up slide is number 13 and the word of the day is abandoned, the picture for the slide is an abandon house that looks very very very old and rusty. We only have ten minutes to write and when the timer goes off you have a chance to finish of you last sentence. After that you go sit next to your writing buddy and go on to there warm up (we already shared it to each other) after your buddy has to write two comments one good comment then one thing they need to work on. My buddy is Kate by the way. I found it very easy to write because when I took my first look of the photo I already saw a picture in my head on what I was going to write. I think I should of added more punctuation like speech marks.Here is what I wrote and Kate's comments!
Just right under here wait a second.

