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Friday, March 22, 2019

six-sentence story / Once upon a time

This week in writing we wrote a six-sentence story about crating a character and adding detail.Our focus was on creating sentences.We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence are....
1. Our sentence must have one idea.
2. Our sentence must make sense.
3. Our sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
4. Our sentence leaves one space between each word.
I found how to make the plan is the hardest and I found how to write the sentence is the easiest.
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 10, 2019 at 11:38 AM

    Hi Rarika I like your story but I relisted you had low ceca I.

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  2. AnonymousApril 10, 2019 at 12:09 PM

    Hi Rarika,
    I really like 6 sentence story about a little dog called daisy. I like how you add some wow words in your story. Next time you can add so many more details than this. Do you like pets? Which type of pet do you like?
    By Jyoshika.

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  3. Miss GoslinApril 28, 2019 at 5:33 PM

    Hi Rarika, Miss Goslin here, thanks for posting your six sentence story. How creative were you to write about a dog with no grip very cool. Next time I would like you to self check your work to see if it makes sense or if you need to add any punctuation.
    Looking forward to hearing back from you.
    Miss Goslin

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  4. AnonymousApril 30, 2019 at 11:21 AM

    Hi Rarika,
    Jyoshika here, I really like your six-sentence story about the little dog called daisy and I like how you use some wow words. Maybe next time you can change the character and write a long story about it.
    By Jyoshika

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