six-sentence story / Once upon a time

This week in writing we wrote a six-sentence story about crating a character and adding detail.Our focus was on creating sentences.We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence are....
1. Our sentence must have one idea.
2. Our sentence must make sense.
3. Our sentence starts with a capital letter and ends with a full stop.
4. Our sentence leaves one space between each word.
I found how to make the plan is the hardest and I found how to write the sentence is the easiest.

a moment in time

                    A moment in time

Aah! were am I.Huh...wow look at the giant shiny plane .Wait am I Supposed to be In the plan um ah !I’m up so high .Let me look in the plane nobody In the plane that Is so weird but look at this beautiful view .So what am i going to do.I have an idea If I am hungry i can eat the Puffy clouds because they look like Cotton candy yum let me put this Fantastic idea in the list .if it  Dark I'll grab a couple of clouds to keep me warm and then .I'm going to put this on my list done.

The end

Today we had Peter from Canterbury Hockey to visit us. First we had to get a hockey stick  up to our belly button and then Peter  taught us  how to play. First we started dribbling the ball . Next we  learnt how to stop and dodge other players. We had to control the ball at all times. Lastly we played rob the nest. I found it hard and tiring to stick to the ball.  I found it easy to dodge the other players. 

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