Hello fellow bloggers welcome back to my blog where I share all of my learning. Today I am the blogger of the week! We have to blog our warm up slides so today I am! Today's warm up slide is number 13 and the word of the day is abandoned, the picture for the slide is an abandon house that looks very very very old and rusty. We only have ten minutes to write and when the timer goes off you have a chance to finish of you last sentence. After that you go sit next to your writing buddy and go on to there warm up (we already shared it to each other) after your buddy has to write two comments one good comment then one thing they need to work on. My buddy is Kate by the way. I found it very easy to write because when I took my first look of the photo I already saw a picture in my head on what I was going to write. I think I should of added more punctuation like speech marks.Here is what I wrote and Kate's comments!
Just right under here wait a second.
Hi Rarika,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your awesome blog post! I like the way you have explained everything you need to do for the writing warm up so that your readers know!
I agree with your comment about punctuation, that is a good next step to think of for next time.
Hope you have had a great weekend!
Miss Lauder ☺️